Feedback on our idea (EXTERNAL)

Based on the feedback we retained from students around my school (not taking media or in my class), we noticed many similarities between peoples ideas swell as some negatives for us to work with and improve on. Many people thought the idea was extremely good, especially for the amount of time we have to put it in. People thought the idea was brilliant for a thriller and it works well, as well as the last scene that end on a cliff hanger which keeps people thinking, what will happen next? After gathering this feedback, we have decided we will be showing a tablet being placed into the water, so it is obvious the drink has been spiked which is more clear for the audience as people didn't think it was a good idea just using a bottle of water, as it was unclear. People found it confusing. To conclude, we have used our feedback positively as we have listened to peoples ideas and gone ahead with using one of them.